[becoming well-versed in the ways of sect leadership isn't something that will happen overnight; it's been a couple years now, sure, but jin ling has been doing it competently the whole time in sizhui's opinion.
although what does he know about being a sect leader while he's still technically training underneath hanguang-jun? or ‘his excellency,’ rather. wait, does that mean— “not just the candy?”
—oh, apparently his own thoughts had been derailed a moment there, too.]
I came to, ah, [but he hesitates as jin ling lifts his arm, eyebrows arching with both curiosity and interest; what's his next move? taking sizhui's wrist, it would seem, and he doesn't hesitate to follow whenever he's chided again – which makes him bite his cheek to hide a smile – then lead toward the bed.
what's unexpected is his friend bodily helping him sit down. that makes his eyes widen somewhat, though he softens almost right away at jin ling's question. sizhui's head dips, he sets his sword aside, laces his fingers together in his lap.
and finally, he admits just underneath his breath,] I was thinking about you, about if you... if you were okay or not.
this is a no judgement zone!! typos happen, english is hard, etc etc
although what does he know about being a sect leader while he's still technically training underneath hanguang-jun? or ‘his excellency,’ rather. wait, does that mean— “not just the candy?”
—oh, apparently his own thoughts had been derailed a moment there, too.]
I came to, ah, [but he hesitates as jin ling lifts his arm, eyebrows arching with both curiosity and interest; what's his next move? taking sizhui's wrist, it would seem, and he doesn't hesitate to follow whenever he's chided again – which makes him bite his cheek to hide a smile – then lead toward the bed.
what's unexpected is his friend bodily helping him sit down. that makes his eyes widen somewhat, though he softens almost right away at jin ling's question. sizhui's head dips, he sets his sword aside, laces his fingers together in his lap.
and finally, he admits just underneath his breath,] I was thinking about you, about if you... if you were okay or not.
[so that's a ‘yes’ on the rushing.]